(3/5 SWA) "Peer Review Follow-Up Script ")

a) What did you learn from reading your classmates’ papers?
- I learned that I should've added a thesis to my paper as I read my classmate's paper
b) Summarize your group members’ suggestions about your OWN paper in a couple of sentences
- He suggested that I change my title since he felt that my title was inappropriate for the topic. He also thought I should add a thesis portion/intro to my paper, since I just dive in to the argument in the paper 
c) Do you agree with their comments? Do you find them helpful (clear, specific)? Lastly, did you use them OR think you will use them in your revision? Why or why not? [be honest; it’s more than okay to disagree with someone as long as you explain why]
- I agree with the thesis portion since it felt sloppy as I read my paper with that comment in mind.  I thought that that portion was a legitmate comment and I do need to add it in. I thought that was really helpful. On the other hand, I thought the title was an appropriate name for the subject of prostitution and probably won't change it. I should've added a thesis to my paper as I read my classmate's paper